Tuesday, August 09, 2005
Redo, Third Time!
After showing my third draft, Ms. Dzeelfa rephrased my thesis statement to “Man’s Arrogance is the Cause of His Own Tragic Fall” Then, she cancelled a few paragraphs that are irrelevant to my issue. Originally, my paper got 1120 words, after the ommission, I got only 920 words. This time, I think I want to comment more about the Greek term hubris which is related to man’s arrogance, so I surfed internet for more information.
# posted by Dr. Yee Bee Choo : 7:39 AM
