Growing Up With Literature

I showed my second draft to Ms. Dzeelfa, again she wanted me to discuss more on my issue and just focus on three supporting details. So, I have decided to relate man’s arrogance to human resource, knowledge and wisdom. I rewrite my draft, cancel unnecessary details and arrange my thesis statement around the three points. I rephrase my thesis statement to “Man’s Arrogance is His Own Tragic Fall for Disregarding God in ‘The Convergence of the Twain’ by Thomas Hardy”.